Posted on July 13, 2010, 12:40 pm, by VFM Leonardo.
3 Comments
David Attardi says:
July 13, 2010 at 3:51 pm
This video is a little too long. I
recommend keeping video between 1 and 2
minutes in length. One way to shorten it
would be to show fewer room shots. You
probably don’t need to show every single
room type in the video. Otherwise, I like
it!
John McAuliffesays:
July 13, 2010 at 3:59 pm
In the version that is posted on your
website (atithiatpondi.com), the resolution
doesn’t fit the viewer – you have a wide
screen video in a square viewer.
To improve this video I recommend:
• Slow downt the camera pans. The fast
camera movement kind of makes me a bit sea
sick.
• Like David said, it’s not necessary to
show all of the different room types in the
video when there’s not much difference in
the rooms. You would be better served doing
360° panoramic virtual tours to show each
room type. They would allow you to show the
detail of the rooms but leave the control of
that to the viewing audience.
• A nice slow pan of the bathroom would be
nice but an aerial view of the toilet is not
necessary.
• I love the roof top pool. I would have
liked to see more of the view from the roof.
mandersays:
July 16, 2010 at 9:27 am
To solve the screen size problem: use
resolution 853 x 480 pixels when you encode
to mp4 which is the recommended WIDE SCREEN
16:9 dv format for youtube / vimeo. As for
the other critique mentioned above I agree,
to much fast camera movements. Don´t be
afraid to use still or slow zoom-pan shots.
+ for postive feeing holliday music
- to long video, to begin with it could stop
at music´s first stop time line 3.05, but
should be even shorter, cut out some room
shots.
3 Comments
David Attardi says:
July 13, 2010 at 3:51 pm
This video is a little too long. I recommend keeping video between 1 and 2 minutes in length. One way to shorten it would be to show fewer room shots. You probably don’t need to show every single room type in the video. Otherwise, I like it!
John McAuliffe says:
July 13, 2010 at 3:59 pm
In the version that is posted on your website (atithiatpondi.com), the resolution doesn’t fit the viewer – you have a wide screen video in a square viewer.
To improve this video I recommend:
• Slow downt the camera pans. The fast camera movement kind of makes me a bit sea sick.
• Like David said, it’s not necessary to show all of the different room types in the video when there’s not much difference in the rooms. You would be better served doing 360° panoramic virtual tours to show each room type. They would allow you to show the detail of the rooms but leave the control of that to the viewing audience.
• A nice slow pan of the bathroom would be nice but an aerial view of the toilet is not necessary.
• I love the roof top pool. I would have liked to see more of the view from the roof.
mander says:
July 16, 2010 at 9:27 am
To solve the screen size problem: use resolution 853 x 480 pixels when you encode to mp4 which is the recommended WIDE SCREEN 16:9 dv format for youtube / vimeo. As for the other critique mentioned above I agree, to much fast camera movements. Don´t be afraid to use still or slow zoom-pan shots.
+ for postive feeing holliday music
- to long video, to begin with it could stop at music´s first stop time line 3.05, but should be even shorter, cut out some room shots.